It was my grandfather who, before he took his life, instilled in me a love of adventure and an appreciation for wilderness survival skills. I reflected on those gifts one morning as I climbed the canyon above Unionville while my husband garnered some needed sleep. I had never ascended the canyon before and did not know the area much above the hamlet clumped on the otherwise isolated east end of the West Humboldt Range. My husband and I were camped behind a ridge above that hamlet. We would have bedded further up the canyon but a slender bent alder blocked our Land Rover’s passage.
As I prepared to depart camp that morning, my husband admonished me in a groggy voice to take a walkie-talkie, so I grabbed one along with my camera. I inhaled deeply the air chilled by night. Dawn’s gold light seeped over the canyon walls. Ahead of me our two hounds traversed the trail.
When the dogs and I passed a tall juniper with plump ghostly-gray berries, it roused a memory of my grandfather. Juniper berries, he had taught me, indicating the wizened ones we had in Maine where I grew up, could be boiled into a tea which aids digestion. But at the age of nine I had a cast iron stomach so I wasn’t motivated to put that knowledge to the test.
A small stream bisected our dusty trail, its moisture supporting a patch of spring green grass and a long leafy arbor. I regretted that my husband was missing so much beauty but was grateful that I felt comfortable hiking solo.
In my youth, my grandfather’s tutelage emboldened me to set out on my own adventures. Often interspersed with those sojourns were other lessons, sometimes with my younger brother joining in. Grandfather taught us to distinguish the poisonous red snake berry from the minty red bunch berry. And to tap maple trees for sap, which we did while imprinting the snowy paths of his land with tracks of the snowshoes he molded for us by hand.
One summer day when we three were together at the Maine shore, grandfather told my brother and me that we could eat the petals of the wild roses mounding over the dunes. I plucked one of the smooth pink wafers, placed it on my tongue, and discovered within it a delicate sweetness. And began to feast.
So in the canyon, when I came upon wild roses, the sight delighted me; but when I grew closer, I saw that the petals were waning and could recall that mushy texture tinged with bitterness.
A mile or so up the trail I spotted a red shotgun shell. I considered picking it up but for a reason I couldn’t identify, walked on. I could feel it in my pocket though, roll it between my index and middle fingers, remember how I used to wonder how something so itty bitty and weightless could tear such a very sure hole.
My grandfather used to lay his shotgun across the wide arms of his oak rocker to clean it, a box of red shells in two perfectly ordered rows by his side. He hunted every deer season and as a result we always had fresh meat. My brother was 16 when he joined the hunts and took to them. He and grandfather, in red wool plaid with solidly shouldered guns, would vanish into the cold pre-dawn void of light.
Water is a welcome sight In the desert. The clear silent stream I had seen at the beginning of my hike wound back over our trail again and again. I paused in the shade of some foliage it supported while the dogs lapped long and slurpily. The sun filtered over the canyon walls and warmed the air. Heightened light inspired me so I took out my camera and wandered a bit, pulled by what I saw through my lens.
Continuing up, the incline steepened, forcing me to push from deeper inside.
A hairpin turn changed our direction. Then another and another. The pattern persisted for forty-five minutes. Scrub vanished and with it the scent of sage. Jagged rocks protruded from long flat ledges like teeth in an otherwise hollow smile.
Then abruptly the trail ended with a sheer 2000-foot drop. I recoiled and grabbed for the dogs. I planted my feet firmly. And stared.
There was a time when I would have contemplated jumping. Most memorably, the afternoon of my brother’s suicide, when I stood on an overpass during rush hour, watching the traffic below, imagining the trajectory of my body, removing my pink mohair sweater and feeding it into an opening in the pipe railing. My younger brother. My only brother followed in our grandfather’s footprints, as he had been groomed to do: the berries, the roses, the maples.
I sobbed. I raged. I wept.
For a decade.
It wasn’t until I grew weary of the pain and turned to faith, that I stopped weeping.
“And the peace of God, which passeth all understanding, shall keep your hearts and minds through Christ” –Phillipians 4:7
Suicide, I finally understood, is and always will be incomprehensible. My brother and I were in our early twenties when my grandfather took his own life rather than seek treatment for prostate cancer. I tried to understand but from the moment I heard the explosion, I was falling, falling, falling. I lost sight of my brother through the hurtling debris that distorted my mind. It was impossible to focus on the petal of a single pink rose.
In Unionville Canyon, with the sun risen just above the peaks, I basked in the ambient brightness. And turned with the dogs to begin my descent.
Coming down the steepest part, I recognized the spot where I had started taking pictures and realized that there was a fork in the trail that I hadn’t previously seen. Uncertain which way to go, I chose a direction, traveled it for a few hundred yards, turned around, and walked the other way. For a moment fear clouded my mind. I fingered the walkie-talkie in my pocket, knowing I could call my husband–but he could hardly advise me on a route from his position at camp and summoning him would earn me a scolding for having become distracted by my camera.
I said a little prayer and proceeded down the second trail, vigilant. With each step, I expected to see something I would recognize, even knowing how improbable that was given the relentless sameness of the trail, the flora, the canyon walls. A few more steps:
Then I saw the red shotgun shell.
- One million people die by suicide each year, deeply affecting many millions more.
- November 17th will mark the 14th Annual International Survivors of Suicide Day. A survivor of suicide is anyone affected by the suicide of a family member, friend, neighbor, classmate, co-worker or other person close to him or her.
- I am not a health care professional. The experiences described herein are personal.
- If you are suffering from suicide ideation, please call a suicide hotline and seek immediate professional help.
46 thoughts on “Unionville Canyon”
That’s so heart touching and inspiring…
Thank you so much for your comment. It touches me that you appreciated this post.
Vivian, sorry for your losses. I enjoy your website and hope to live your lifestyle in future. I look forward to more of your postings. gary
Thank you. I’m delighted that you enjoy the site. Happy Holidays! Vivian
Beautifully written, so insightful, wonderful. Thank you! xo
Hi Danna, Thanks so much for your generous comment:) Love and hugs.
I admire this narrative. Well done, so very touching.
Thank you very much Moriah. It was defintely a challenging piece in terms of narrative.
I struggled to “like” this post for reasons to long to list here but those same reasons are the very reasons why I will “like” this post.
I am very sorry for your loss but I am thankful you having the faith to share. I am going to re-blog this because , well the reasons are to long to list.
Peace be to and yours.
Thank you very much for your heartfelt response. I appreciate you taking the time to write to me and I know what you mean about the “like” button–it doesn’t always work when we’re having a more complex response. This was a challenging piece to write both emotionally and in terms of narrative, so it means a lot to me to know that it touched you.
Reblogged this on Pondering Things and Taking Pictures and commented:
I have felt the sting of suicide and know the after taste is vile and hot in the minds of all who this tragedy is visited upon. I hope that anyone who reads this, no matter what side of the divided you are now standing on or have stood upon, will breath in and look for hope.
Peace be with you.
Thank you so much for reblogging this post. I’m sorry to learn that you, too, have been hurt by suicide. Suicide is a very particular form of suffering and grief. Feeling isolated by the experience or loss can greatly compound the impact. I’m deeply honored by your response to my post and I thank you again. Warmly, Vivian
You are very Welcome.
wow truely heart touching , fantastic 🙂
Hi Amresh, Thank you so much for writing to me. I’m very hsppy to hear from you and I am grateful that you were touched by this post. Many blessings, Vivian
In response to the ending, woaw! I was reading a quote yesterday that says “Sometime you find yourself in the middle of nowhere. And sometimes, in the middle of nowhere you find yourself”. I was thinking about that quote at one point while reading your story.
A very appropriate quote indeed. My husband had the same response as you to the ending. A good sign, I would think, in terms of a challenging narrative. Thank you so much for your comment:)
It’s hart to lost two lovely people. I think about you greetings Susanne
Thank you so much for your kindness Susanne. –Vivian
Wow. Well–you did it. Thank you for sharing your story.
I will always be grateful to you for the role you played in the development of this narrative. You were so fearless writing about your brother’s suicide, that it gave me a courage and clarity that were missing in my previous attempts to write this story. Thank you so much, Vivian
That so much warms my cold dying heart =) Thank you ❤
Thank you for sharing this very personal story.
Hi Steven, Thank you for reading the story and for taking the time to write me. I very much appreciate it. Warm regards, Vivian
My dear Vivian,
I have come by and read this post several times since it was published. And over the last few days, I thought of you often, lulled and drawn into your vividly painted walk one morning through a desert trail which merged seamlessly into the past. I listened carefully to the voice of your words.
I am so very sorry to hear of this tragic loss in your life. I am so sorry you had to go through that fall.
Thank you for sharing with us so honestly some of life’s journeys into the wilderness. Your voice tells me that you now write and walk from a place of strength. And that you have now found your way back. And what a very good place to be today. That red shotgun shell – what a profound and beautiful closure. One of your finest writing yet.
With all my love, from one who understands the desert experience. Sharon
Thank you for your thoughtful response to this story. When I was working on the story I reflected considerably on a piece by a blogger who wrote a tribute to his brother who committed suicide–and on your work. I also reflected on your courage when revealing your breast cancer and on the reticent intensity that you bring to your narratives. It’s always a gift when a friend becomes a teacher and an inspiration.
With gratitude, Vivan
It’s extremely tragic. One of my best friends had committed suicide and that day, a part of my heart died forever! It’s actually the near and dear ones, of the one who committed suicide that are the worst affected. They can never really come to terms with the fact that their loved one killed self! God bless them
Dear Teju, It is good to hear from you and thank you for very much for your comment. I’m very sorry to learn that you lost one of your best friends to suicide. Yes suicide does visit a very merciless anuquish on those who are left behind. It is my experience that, while health care professionls can somewhat help us to manage the suffering during its acute phases, God and God alone can comfort us. You are often in my thoughts. Many blessings, Vivian
I am so very, very impressed with your strength in God. I can’t even begin to imagine the pain you must have felt inside. I lost my dad to cancer about 8 years ago and saw what he had to go through – I saw the fear in his eyes and can only imagine how scared your grandpa must have been. My heart just breaks for those who have to suffer so much. Thank you for sharing this part of your life!
Thank you for such a lovely comment Kimberly. I’m sorry to hear that you lost your Dad to cancer. I also lost my father to cancer and it is definitely a long and sad trial for everyone involved.
I am sure my grandfathe was terrified or he would not have chosen this path. We all have our breaking points. By the grace of God, I have found comfort in His love. I hope you have too:) Thank you again for writing:) Have a great day!
I am so sorry to hear about your father to cancer too, it is a long and sad trial for everyone involved!!! I am so very, very thankful we have God to comfort us in our lives. I can’t even begin to imagine going through life without that peace. I hope you have a great day too! 🙂
thank you for sharing your experience with suicide….I attempted once..God chose to save me despite myself….and I have never wanted to do it again…..
God bless you and praise Him for sparing you…God reveals His love and mercy when we place our faith in Him. I’m delighted that you wrote to me. I’ve just had a quick glance at your blog and it’s evident that we are of one mind concerning the path that our country and culture are taking. My warm regards,
Your story reminded me of the times I had wanted to die and the divine intervention that clearly changed my life. As always I love your writing, and the photos a delightful too. I did find myself wanting to see a photo of the cliff your trail led too.
(in reference to the fork in the road) It has been suggested by a spiritual teacher to let go and trust, you will be led, or in your words- bring curiosity to where God takes you. It is only an illusion you think you are in charge anyway. lots of love jb
You are so kind to write to me of your experiences with despair and divine intervention. It means a great deal to me to know that this story is meaningful to you and that God has spared you.
I wish I could provide you with a photo of that cliff but because I am using a small point and shoot camera, I’m somewhat limited in scope, unless the ligth is just right, which it wasn’t (for the cliff) that morning. I hope to be graduating to a new camera soon.
With love and many blessings, Vivian
Well, you’re raising an interesting point. First of all, when I say that God has spared you, I am referring to suicide, i.e. if you have wanted to die but have not committed suicide you have been spared the anguish of that act. That being said, I do believe that it is often a form of trial to remain here on this earth, I do believe that in death, we are with God, that God is beautiful and peaceful and loving and more exquisite than anything we can imagine.
I never write in this blog about the many experiences I have had that transcend our physical reality but they definitely do shape my perception of death. I’ve always felt, however, that death by suicide is different, not because of a religous stance but because of my experience with these suicides.
I don’t know your experience of life or death and I apologize if I was presumptuous when I said that God had spared you. It is purely my perception.
Thanks for initiating a lively discussion!
Vivian, this is a powerful and moving account from your life. Thank you for the honest sharing and the hope that comes through.
Dear Marilyn, I so admire your writing, the strength and the tenderness that comes through in each of your pieces…it means a lot to me that you were moved by this and took the time to write me. Blessings, Vivan
I can relate to suicide. I survived by the Grace of God and I am forever Grateful. I have experienced close to my heart someone who committed suicide. I understand what it is. Having FAITH to God is what keeps me alive. I still think about it but it has no hold on me anymore. Thanks for sharing your story. God Bless You.
It sounds as if we have had some similar struggles. Thank you so much for writing to me and sharing your experience of God’s grace and your faith. May God continue to bless you and keep you safe on your journey. –Vivian
God has helped us through suicide as well. It’s scary to be in that state but even mor so when it’s your children. Thanks so much for your sharing such an honest and poignant account. We all have our own journey.
I’m so sorry to hear that you lost your child to suicide. I’m certain that I cannot fully understand how terrifying and heartbreaking that must have been but I see how my mother suffers still, how she can barely speak of it after more than a decade. Sadly, she does not have the benefit of faith to comfort her but perhaps one day that will change. It means a lot that you wrote to me about this. Thank you. Warmly, Vivian
I just read this post.you are so talented in writing and so touching, Vivian.
Thank you most kindly for your visit and for leaving me such a nice note. It means a lot to me to know that you were touched by this piece. Warm regards, Vivian
Vivian, I always enjoy reading your work-but this is one of the best pieces I think I have read so far-the images conveyed by your words bring sight, sound, taste and smell to life even at the expense of laying bare your own pain- Thank you-
Thank you kindly for visiting and for reading this piece Meg. Funny, I’ve been thinking that I want to begin to give more attention to detail in my blog writing. With this piece I found myself focusing on detail more than in many of the others, because I thought at one point about expanding and submitting it.